Post by Scanjet on Apr 10, 2006 16:49:13 GMT
Have a read and see if you think this is worth me continuing with...
We open on Mansbridge Academy, its looks just as dark, just a eerie from when we left it two months ago... Clouds scatter across the midnight sky, the full moon resting its glowing rays above the top of the school.
We slowly move down the corridors of the school, it feels empty, alone, deserted even. A person walks slowly down the corridor, the body is revealed slowly, baggy jeans, an orange jacket, a structured face and bright red hair, it could only be Dillon. She walks at pace which begins slow and then increases with speed as she nears her destination.
In the library Mimi is trying to study a large book but not getting very far, she admits defeat and closes the dusty book with a thud. She coughs as dust particles fly into her face and then chuckles to herself. A creak sounds from behind her; she turns in a sudden manner to the open doorway of the library. Nothing there, she shrugs and begins to pack some of her belongings away. Another noise, louder this time, sounds from behind her, by now she is a little worried, “Hey... HEY! Anyone there?” Nothing. She slowly gets up and walks to the door, the floor creaks from below, then, in a unexpected manner Dillon appears from behind Mimi, her eyes glowing red and teeth large, needing blood, she digs them firmly into Mimi...
Opening Credits
Welcome back to Mansbridge...
Dillon awakens in a hot sweat, breathing deeply. Mimi is above her looking a little concerned, “Hey Dil, you ok?” Dillon looks at her not knowing what to say but decides on something, “Erm... yeah, just had a bad dream.” Mimi looks at her again and then her concern turns to a smile, “everyone has a nightmare when they come back to this place, anyway hurry up and get ready, we have a lesson in ten minutes.” As Mimi goes back to making her bed Dillon face is full of worry... full of angst...
In the wine cellar of Mansbridge Drew is working on a sketch, he is working on the the main bulk of the face, he moves his hand further down to reveal a very likeness of Dillon. Drew holds it out and smilies at what he has produced.
Marty walks over to Drew and pulls the picture from his hands and looks at it himself, “Ohhh now Drew have you fallen in love with another human! You just can't help yourself can you!” Marty's face has a huge grin across it as he waits for a reaction from Drew, but her merely shrugs and walks away throwing the pencil to the floor.
Murdoch calls down the stairs to the cellar for the group to go to his office for a little chat. Marty, Drew, Merrill and Essie all walk up the stairs together but with an absence of Karl. As they all sit in his office he smiles to them and begin, “Well as you all know Karl has been away from us for two months now while he tries to come to terms with what he did. I am sure you will all be happy to know that he is making brilliant progress and will be back with us before long I am sure and no...” Murdoch stopped suddenly and stood back throwing his chair to the floor holding his hand over his mouth. In the background Dillon is holding Mimi high in the air and drinking her blood while her red eyes stare straight into Murdoch's eyes.
The vampires all look shocked at Murdoch, Essie then speaks up, “Mr Murdoch? What's wrong?” Still shocked he points across the room to the unspeakable horror. The vampires look but see nothing, “There is nothing there Sir,” says Merrill who is confused about what is happening. Murdoch closes his eyes and then reopens them slowly, there is nothing there, the room is empty except for the vampires who are situated in front of him, and Marty looks at Murdoch, “What the hell happened then?”
End of Part 1
Murdoch is sitting in his chair with Merrill and Essie next to him while Drew looks deep in thought and Marty paces the room. “And you saw Dillon biting Mimi?” asks Essie in a sympathetic way, not usually a side we see to her. “Not just biting her,” said Murdoch, his voice quivering, “but destroying her, it was like nothing I have ever seen before.”
Merrill stood up as Essie comforted Murdoch. She walked over to Drew and began to speak, “Drew there is something really wrong here, I think I will have to do some research to see if I can find out going on.” Drew looked up and nodded, “Yeah your right Merrill...” He stammered, “Merrill?” She had begun to walk away but she turned round and looked at Drew, “What?” Drew looked at her unsure of what to say, “Never mind.” She shrugged and carried on walking back down to the basement.
Merrill was reading a large book while Marty threw bits of paper at her. Merrill looked at him and smiled, “Quit it Marty or I will never find out what happened today.” Marty jumped down from the table and came over to her, “And?” Merrill smiled again and went back to what she was reading.
Essie was sitting over by her coffin and wondering about what had happened today, she sighed and closed her eyes. We zoom through the corridors, everything is blurred, as we enter Dillon's room we see her tossing and turning in bed. Essie's face is confused, we shoot back and we have entered Dillon's dream... Dillon is standing there biting Mimi's neck as Mimi screams with pain trying to get away. But Dillon is just too strong for her. We flash back to Essie who opens her eyes suddenly and jumps down to go and see Merrill.
Merrill is still reading her book when Essie comes over shouting, “Merrill... Merrill... I was just in Dillon's dream and I saw her attacking Mimi.” Merrill looks stunned for a second then she face looks like everything had clicked into place. She gets up and runs up the ramp, Essie close on her trail.
Merrill runs through the door and into Murdoch's office who is not at is desk, she turns round looking at the room and sees him quivering in the corner holding his legs tight and crying, sobbing even. Merrill looks to Essie who seems upset and disturbed by Murdoch “Essie I think I know whats happened,” Essie turns to face Merrill, “What then, what??” there is a sense of danger in her voice. Merrill looks back to Murdoch and begins to speak, “ I think Dillon has become a hybrid, a mix of human and vampire, she is alive and human but has the urges of a vampire, I also think Murdoch is a hybrid who has learned to control his urges. But now, since Dillon was attacked he has become connected to her and thats why he is seeing these terrible things. The only way we can stop this is if we have Karl here to break the spell over the two.” Essie looks shocked and realizes, “But Karl is with the Elders...” Merrill looks from Essie to Murdoch who is crying even more, “Exactly...”
Drew is sitting at the table drawing another picture of Dillon, he hears light footsteps at the top of the ramp from the office above, he turns as the legs of the person are revealed, then the body... and then the head... He looks at her in shock, not being able to breathe as he stutters a word out... “Sh..Sherry?” We look at Sherry standing in front of him smiling wildly, her eyes black...
End Credits
We open on Mansbridge Academy, its looks just as dark, just a eerie from when we left it two months ago... Clouds scatter across the midnight sky, the full moon resting its glowing rays above the top of the school.
We slowly move down the corridors of the school, it feels empty, alone, deserted even. A person walks slowly down the corridor, the body is revealed slowly, baggy jeans, an orange jacket, a structured face and bright red hair, it could only be Dillon. She walks at pace which begins slow and then increases with speed as she nears her destination.
In the library Mimi is trying to study a large book but not getting very far, she admits defeat and closes the dusty book with a thud. She coughs as dust particles fly into her face and then chuckles to herself. A creak sounds from behind her; she turns in a sudden manner to the open doorway of the library. Nothing there, she shrugs and begins to pack some of her belongings away. Another noise, louder this time, sounds from behind her, by now she is a little worried, “Hey... HEY! Anyone there?” Nothing. She slowly gets up and walks to the door, the floor creaks from below, then, in a unexpected manner Dillon appears from behind Mimi, her eyes glowing red and teeth large, needing blood, she digs them firmly into Mimi...
Opening Credits
Welcome back to Mansbridge...
Dillon awakens in a hot sweat, breathing deeply. Mimi is above her looking a little concerned, “Hey Dil, you ok?” Dillon looks at her not knowing what to say but decides on something, “Erm... yeah, just had a bad dream.” Mimi looks at her again and then her concern turns to a smile, “everyone has a nightmare when they come back to this place, anyway hurry up and get ready, we have a lesson in ten minutes.” As Mimi goes back to making her bed Dillon face is full of worry... full of angst...
In the wine cellar of Mansbridge Drew is working on a sketch, he is working on the the main bulk of the face, he moves his hand further down to reveal a very likeness of Dillon. Drew holds it out and smilies at what he has produced.
Marty walks over to Drew and pulls the picture from his hands and looks at it himself, “Ohhh now Drew have you fallen in love with another human! You just can't help yourself can you!” Marty's face has a huge grin across it as he waits for a reaction from Drew, but her merely shrugs and walks away throwing the pencil to the floor.
Murdoch calls down the stairs to the cellar for the group to go to his office for a little chat. Marty, Drew, Merrill and Essie all walk up the stairs together but with an absence of Karl. As they all sit in his office he smiles to them and begin, “Well as you all know Karl has been away from us for two months now while he tries to come to terms with what he did. I am sure you will all be happy to know that he is making brilliant progress and will be back with us before long I am sure and no...” Murdoch stopped suddenly and stood back throwing his chair to the floor holding his hand over his mouth. In the background Dillon is holding Mimi high in the air and drinking her blood while her red eyes stare straight into Murdoch's eyes.
The vampires all look shocked at Murdoch, Essie then speaks up, “Mr Murdoch? What's wrong?” Still shocked he points across the room to the unspeakable horror. The vampires look but see nothing, “There is nothing there Sir,” says Merrill who is confused about what is happening. Murdoch closes his eyes and then reopens them slowly, there is nothing there, the room is empty except for the vampires who are situated in front of him, and Marty looks at Murdoch, “What the hell happened then?”
End of Part 1
Murdoch is sitting in his chair with Merrill and Essie next to him while Drew looks deep in thought and Marty paces the room. “And you saw Dillon biting Mimi?” asks Essie in a sympathetic way, not usually a side we see to her. “Not just biting her,” said Murdoch, his voice quivering, “but destroying her, it was like nothing I have ever seen before.”
Merrill stood up as Essie comforted Murdoch. She walked over to Drew and began to speak, “Drew there is something really wrong here, I think I will have to do some research to see if I can find out going on.” Drew looked up and nodded, “Yeah your right Merrill...” He stammered, “Merrill?” She had begun to walk away but she turned round and looked at Drew, “What?” Drew looked at her unsure of what to say, “Never mind.” She shrugged and carried on walking back down to the basement.
Merrill was reading a large book while Marty threw bits of paper at her. Merrill looked at him and smiled, “Quit it Marty or I will never find out what happened today.” Marty jumped down from the table and came over to her, “And?” Merrill smiled again and went back to what she was reading.
Essie was sitting over by her coffin and wondering about what had happened today, she sighed and closed her eyes. We zoom through the corridors, everything is blurred, as we enter Dillon's room we see her tossing and turning in bed. Essie's face is confused, we shoot back and we have entered Dillon's dream... Dillon is standing there biting Mimi's neck as Mimi screams with pain trying to get away. But Dillon is just too strong for her. We flash back to Essie who opens her eyes suddenly and jumps down to go and see Merrill.
Merrill is still reading her book when Essie comes over shouting, “Merrill... Merrill... I was just in Dillon's dream and I saw her attacking Mimi.” Merrill looks stunned for a second then she face looks like everything had clicked into place. She gets up and runs up the ramp, Essie close on her trail.
Merrill runs through the door and into Murdoch's office who is not at is desk, she turns round looking at the room and sees him quivering in the corner holding his legs tight and crying, sobbing even. Merrill looks to Essie who seems upset and disturbed by Murdoch “Essie I think I know whats happened,” Essie turns to face Merrill, “What then, what??” there is a sense of danger in her voice. Merrill looks back to Murdoch and begins to speak, “ I think Dillon has become a hybrid, a mix of human and vampire, she is alive and human but has the urges of a vampire, I also think Murdoch is a hybrid who has learned to control his urges. But now, since Dillon was attacked he has become connected to her and thats why he is seeing these terrible things. The only way we can stop this is if we have Karl here to break the spell over the two.” Essie looks shocked and realizes, “But Karl is with the Elders...” Merrill looks from Essie to Murdoch who is crying even more, “Exactly...”
Drew is sitting at the table drawing another picture of Dillon, he hears light footsteps at the top of the ramp from the office above, he turns as the legs of the person are revealed, then the body... and then the head... He looks at her in shock, not being able to breathe as he stutters a word out... “Sh..Sherry?” We look at Sherry standing in front of him smiling wildly, her eyes black...
End Credits
Ooh!! More, please!! Don't make me beg! 
